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Maya looked at him, the rain still tapping against the glass. The path ahead wasn't going to be easy, and the bags weren't unpacked yet. But for the first time in months, Julian felt light. He had finally learned that the hardest truths are the only things strong enough to build a real future on. Babyface – Never Keeping Secrets Lyrics - Genius
"So I'm telling everybody now," Julian said, his eyes meeting hers. "I know I was a fool. But I don't give a damn about anything else but getting back with you. No more secrets. No more lies. I just want to make it up to you". Babyface Never Keeping Secrets
He sat on the floor at her feet, stripping away the "clout" and the ego he’d been trying to protect. He told her everything—not to ask for immediate forgiveness, but because he realized that a relationship built on secrets was just a house of cards waiting for a breeze. Maya looked at him, the rain still tapping against the glass